Monday, December 27, 2010

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At the  irenic Morning
Under the same blue,
I hitted  the same stand
with all the last night dreams,
have seen for you...
But why you turned????
from the extreme core,
with the one,as u forget
we were friends before...



Pretermiting the world around
holding hands in hands,
If this is the only reason ,
you have for me to blamed...
 
'then really you should be ashamed'.


But really I am not upset..
Infact I am very elicit thinking,
If I was so happy with a wrong one,
How heavenly I will feel ...

When I get the true one.


But still,
If that 3 words are the reason
for which I had blamed,
 
'then really you should be ashamed'.
for the line you once said...

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14 comments:

mounica said...

very nice...

suryansh hursh said...

thankz monica

Anonymous said...

hey hursh ji...dats really exotic nd unimaginable....nd really say dat u worth dese comments.....gud luck...its really superb

Unknown said...

thankz a lot ansh :)

Ranju said...

superb...u r a gr8 poet dear...just love ur hand...:)

Unknown said...

thankzz ranju dalzz :)

Anonymous said...

Simply outstanding....D best breakup poem ever...keep it up dude

Unknown said...

dts true..
ppl blaming for things we havnt done..
" they shud really b ashamed"
n drz nthn left unsaid dude!!

Unknown said...

yup shona...datz y i m saying "u relle sud b ashamed" 4 d line u once said "smthn r bst left unsaid" :P

Anonymous said...

Simply outstanding..just love ur blog ...keep writing dude

Anonymous said...

awesome hursh..... wow!!!!

Unknown said...

Thankzz vartika :)

Unknown said...

oye?
maine kya kiya?
ye kaisa comment tha?

Unknown said...

oho...m nt telling u duffr :)